who is an english genius?

[wuzzie12]

<p>and wants to grammar correct this :D</p>

<pre><code> It’s not often that traveling comes to mind as a major extracurricular activity. It obviously doesn’t warrant a scholarship, or garner any type of national recognition, or anything else conventionally obtained under the label of ‘extracurricular’, but it has, without a doubt, been the most life enriching activity I’ve engaged in outside of the classroom.
Strictly through traveling with my school, I have learned far more about the human condition than I ever could have simply out of a textbook. It’s been instrumental in molding my perception of the world, particularly in the discovery of how interconnected mankind is, in spite of national prejudice and cultural boundaries.
Having the opportunity to live out these experiences has been nothing short of a dream come true. I realize how fortunate I am to even have these experiences, and I hope some day I can put what I’ve learned from them to good use.
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[typeakid]

<p>First Paragraph-</p>

<p>I don’t know if it is a browser issue or your mistake that none of your words that should contain apostrophes contain them, so double check “It’s” “Doesn’t” and the last one which escapes me at the moment. Remove the “or” after the first comma in the second sentence. Personally, the second sentence for me is a bit long, so after the third clause I would put a period and start the next sentence with a “Despite of this” type phrase.</p>

<p>Second Paragraph-</p>

<p>Remove the last comma of paragraph.</p>

<p>Third Paragraph-</p>

<p>Keep the paper in one tense, make the first line “Having had” or change the past tenses to present tenses. Remove the last comma of the paragraph.</p>

<p>Hope this helps!</p>

<p>-------------------------------------------If it is to be, it is up to me…</p>

[wuzzie12]

<p>thank you!!! so so so much!</p>