Who wants to read a first draft ?

College Essays
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<p>This is the first draft to my main common app essay. I know it's not the best at the moment and I would love to hear some feedback about what I can do to fix it.</p>

2

<p>sure, PM it to me. (I already finished mine and sent it)</p>

3

<p>I’ll read it if you want any other feedback (I’ve also already finished my common app essay)</p>