Who wants to read a VERY personal essay for Dartmouth?

<p>Please tell me if I should use it or not (and what should i change?). Does it make me sound too crazy? Does it say alot about me?</p>

<p>pm me your essay ;)</p>

<p>I would love to read it and give you my thoughts. PM it to me.</p>

<p>PM it to me too :)</p>

<p>I thought dartmouth didn't have their own essay, unless you're talking a common application solely for dartmouth?</p>

<p>i'll comment on it, if you want. I AM an 08er, but I already submitted my application.</p>

<p>I'll read nd give suggestions. PM me</p>

<p>i'll read it :)</p>

<p>i'll read.</p>

<p>PM me :) i'll read !!</p>

<p>ok , send it for me</p>

<p>ok send it</p>

<p>PM me i can give u response</p>

<p>pm me too, i'll look at it</p>

<p>I'll read it - pm me.</p>

<p>Me tooo! I wanna read. :)</p>