Who wants to read my Common App Essay?

<p>I'm terrible at writing/English/Grammar, so i understand that my essay wont be a "strong" one but Can anyone read my essay please...I need constructive criticism, dont hold back. Tell me ways that i can improve etc....... Thanks Alot..Not sure if i posted this in the right Section.</p>

<p>I’ll read it!</p>

<p>Should I pm it to you?</p>

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