Who wants to read my Personal Statement?

College Essays
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<p>I just finished the first draft of my personal essay (for Common App and a few other schools) and I'd be very grateful if you could spend a few minutes reading it and giving me your feedback - please be as critical as you can! :)</p>

<p>If you're interested send me a PM or post in this thread.</p>

<p>Thanks very much!!!</p>

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<p>PM me :) will spend my time !!</p>

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<p>anybody else please? it's urgent because I don't have access to internet for one week after this weekend...</p>

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<p>send it over then</p>

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<p>send it to me then</p>

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<p>i can give it a read if you want.</p>

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<p>sure. </p>

<p>send to my email: <a href="mailto:mzsat100@gmail.com">mzsat100@gmail.com</a><a href="my%20PM%20box%20is%20full">/email</a></p>

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<p>still looking for critics...</p>