Who wants to read some essays?

College Essays
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<p>Okay, so I have several essays that you guys can read.</p>

<p>Here they are:
Shorter Essays
CARLETON - teacher
CARLETON - subject
CARLETON - career
CARLETON - interest
CARLETON - reading
GRINNELL - first learned
GRINNELL - why
LEWIS - first learned
LEWIS - why
MACALESTER - first learned
COMMON APP - activities</p>

<p>Longer Essays
MACALESTER - why
REED - why
WASHINGTON - family experience
WASHINGTON - cultural (reuse for whitman)
COMMON APP - main essay</p>

<p>I am looking for feedback about how my "voice" and personality show through. I would also like to know about any grammatical errors or things that seem unclear, and stuff like that. My common app essay is about death, so I am interested to know how well I pulled that off.</p>

<p>Go ahead and post what you would like to read, and if you are a high school student, I would like to know what colleges you are applying to, just to be safe. If you only have a few posts, I might not send you my essays. Sorry, don't take it personally, I am just scared of being ripped off.</p>

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<p>I'll read your main essay. And don't worry about being ripped off; I've already sent mine :)</p>

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<p>okay, thanks. it isn't quite done yet but i should have it to you in a couple of hours.</p>

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<p>I'll read them all--I've already sent in my apps-Jan. 1st deadline. I have a lot of free time.</p>

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<p>I'd love to read some essays! I'll be applying for musical theatre programs next year, and none of them I'm considering are at the schools you've mentioned. I totally understand that you don't want to be ripped off!</p>

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<p>okay guys, i will send them over as i get them written. they aren't all finished yet, haha. thanks for your help; i really appreciate it.</p>

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<p>you can pm me too..and I'm a guy not applying to any of those schools...so i have no plans to rip you off :)</p>

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<p>does anyone else want to look over my main common app essay? thanks guys!</p>

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<p>I'm in ed at Amherst. I'll read your common app essay, but only if you want honest feedback/edits....</p>

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<p>hpg gives good feedback :)
but i wouldnt trust the guys with like 4 posts saying "Dont worry, u can send it to me!" ya have to be safe :)</p>

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<p>thanks guys, i PMed you.</p>

<p>anyone else?</p>

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<p>ill read some essays, always interesting</p>

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<p>yeh, i'll try my best to critique your essays, send em here.</p>

<p>P.S. i'm not applying this year, so i'm not competing with you, don't worry</p>

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<p>It would be great for me too, i want to read</p>