Who's down for some essay critique?

<p>I just completed a preliminary draft of my Common App essay. If anyone is interested in reading the essay for some critique and constructive feedback (preferably students who have already been through the college admissions process and have been around this site for a while), please let me know!</p>

<p>For some background information, I'm using this essay for the following schools:</p>

<p>~Princeton
~Cornell
~Duke
~Vanderbilt</p>

<p>The essay is about running. Which is basically all I do.</p>

<p>Send me yours. I can send you mine as well. Trust me, I am not applying to any of those schools. I am doing BA/MD programs mainly.</p>

<p>Parent, here. But I’ll throw in my 2 cents around midnight if you want to pm.</p>

<p>Sorry, freerhyme, I’m really no good at critiquing others’ essays :-/</p>

<p>Hi, I want to read any essay! thanks.</p>

<p>Sure, PM it over.</p>

<p>firelight, I PM’d you the essay.</p>

<p>lovecolleges, are you a high school student?</p>

<p>Hey Pioneer, I’m a senior but submitted an ED app yesterday (essay is done). You can send it to me if you want.</p>