Who's willing to critique my deferral-reversal essay?

<p>I have to send my optional essay to Princeton ASAP (i.e. the end of the week). My problem is 2-fold: </p>

<li><p>Shoud I send in my essay that I had written that goes more into detail what my goals are and why I chose Princeton or an essay I had written for another college that I think is decent but has nothing to do with Princeton or my love for it.</p></li>
<li><p>If I send in my custom-built essay for Princeton, what I should edit (its kinda lengthy- over a page long).</p></li>
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<p>If any of you Princeton regulars (You know who you are) are willing to read these essays and critique them, and help me make a decision for which one to send in, I would be extremely grateful.</p>

<p>I'll read them over for you if you want - feel free to PM me them.</p>

<p>FYI, I'm not sending in my supplements until Monday, which is the 31st, although I am expressing them. I would rather have the weekend to put final touches on them than rush to get them done by Friday - I don't think they'll throw them away if they arrive (gasp) on Feb. 2...</p>

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<li><p>first or second choice would be better than the last one. (unless the last one is absolutely wonderful) anyway, just send an essay that's really appealing; i think a topic itself is less important.</p></li>
<li><p>i think you should edit(even though i havent read yours). make it concise yet lovely!</p></li>
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<p>yeah i will read it for you. PM me.</p>

<p>PM me with it</p>

<p>silmon77, i'd love to read it..!!</p>

<p>pm me. i'll be comfortable w/ reading it bc i didn't apply ed to princeton, and therefore don't have my own princeton deferral reversal letter to worry about. :)
good luck everyone!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!</p>

<p>why do you have to send it so soon? they don't really look at deferred students till march</p>

<p>The deferral letter said they wanted supplements around the end of January (although no specific date was given). It did not, however, provide a reason why they needed supplements so soon; although perhaps this is so that, come March, everything is filed and ready for review?</p>

<p>i'll be glad to look it over for you and give u some feedback</p>

<p>PM me with it silmon</p>

<p>yea, same PM me i'd be willing to read it/xchange mine</p>

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I don't think they'll throw them away if they arrive (gasp) on Feb. 2...

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Can't I just fax the letter? Airmail from India will take a week or more to arrive at Princeton.</p>

<p>call so they know to expect your fax.</p>

<p>PM me with the essay!</p>

<p>i wanna join the fun!!! PM me please :) (with the essay ofcourse ;))</p>

<p>me too :) PM me :)</p>

<p>silmon77,</p>

<p>i think u should send the revised essay in.. i did... i think it shows that u actually put time to improve ur app..</p>