Why ____ Essay -- Please Read Over??

<p>would like some input on this why rutgers essay i've just written. it doesn't really matter if you've got a specific understanding of rutgers or not, i just really would like a general appraisal of the essay and its subject of discussion. particularly, i'd like to ask readers if it focuses enough on the specifics of the university or if it's too vague.</p>

<p>any takers???</p>

<p>Bump this – can anyone please look over it?</p>

<p>Send it to me if you’ll critique my UIUC essay in return</p>

<p>Pm it over!</p>

<p>pm me and i’ll read it</p>

<p>PM I will read it!</p>

<p>i would be happy to read it PM me please!</p>

<p>Would love to help. PM me.</p>

<p>pm me…my brother’s currently in Rutgers. He and I will take a look at your essay. :)</p>

<p>pm it over! i’d love to help :)</p>