Why Brown essay-anyone wanna comment?

Colleges and Universities A-Z Brown University
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<p>I wrote it, but I’m not really satisfied with it.
I tried to be creative, but… urrr… I don’t know.</p>

<p>can someone actually READ it and kinda comment on it?
grammar error/structure/flow etc… comments would be fine too.</p>

<p>someone please help.</p>

<p>ALSO, remember I can return favors too:)</p>

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<p>i'll read it, and i might need some people to read some of my essays eventually too, so it works out perfectly haha</p>

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<p>ill read it</p>

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<p>i would love to critique it... I would also love for u to read mine... pm me or aim me much <3</p>

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<p>i'll read it</p>

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<p>i'll read it.</p>

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<p>if you still need help with editing, just pm me</p>

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<p>sure pm me</p>

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<p>i'll read it Pm me</p>

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<p>yeah please pm me- i want to help</p>

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<p>sure i'll read it. pm me.</p>

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<p>I can take a look at it as well! :)</p>

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<p>I'd love to let you know what I think</p>

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<p>yea yea send it</p>

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<p>I'll read it if you'd like. Besides, I want to see what kind of essays my own will be up against.</p>

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<p>i'll be happy to take a look</p>

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<p>i'll read, although I mailed mine today, so it's too late for anyone to critique mine :( Hope i can be of help though</p>

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<p>I'll read it, although I doubt you need more comments. I do it for fun!</p>

<p>Edit- God, that sounded fruity.</p>

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<p>i'll do it. i have been doing this for several days now, so why not critique another one.</p>

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<p>I, too, will read it. I may or may not critique it, though.</p>