<p>This is just a general tip about essays--I'm sure you guys already know this, but don't have so many people read/edit them that it's not really you behind the essay anymore. IMO it matters more how well you show yourself than how well it's organized or structured.</p>
<p>sacrificed quality for omg get it done lol</p>
<p>story of my Christmas vacation and honestly idc anymore</p>
<p>i can read it, i've already submitted my app.</p>