Why BU is a good fit for you and what specifically has led you to apply for admission?

Student Lounge International Students
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<p>Everything I need from a university is available at BU. Especially, the education system that I am looking forward to. It has many majors and minors to choose from, which gives me more opportunity to take two courses at once. Luckily for me, BU has the College of Arts and Science, which would allow me to take courses in BU and other colleges. Honestly speaking, I have multiple interests therefore I will probably want to have two majors. Moreover at BU I can have two majors from two different colleges. Indeed, there are many opportunities at BU, such as studying abroad and participating in one of many activities and clubs. In fact, BU is also in the city, which is a must for me. All in all, when I glanced at images of the environment and the location of the university, I honestly admired it. Due to this reason, BU is my perfect fit and that is what has led me to apply for admission.</p>

<p>Any errors that I can't see myself? Is there anything I should improve upon? Any suggestions? </p>

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<p>From a language point of view I’d drop some of your initial phrases: the honestly speakings, all in all, indeeds, moreovers, etc. And from a content point of view, it’s a bit vague - perhaps you could say which potential majors and minors or activities might interest you.</p>

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<p>Wow, this is incredibly vague and could be applied to any uni. You need to say “why” BU specifically? What courses to they offer that interest you? What professors would you like to study with and why? What clubs would you like to join and how would your past experiences make you an asset? What about the city makes it appeal to you - the history, the architecture, the sports teams? Which majors interest you and why? What courses to you take in HS that prepare you to do well in uni? </p>

<p>You have to get really specific. Even if you’ve never visited, make sure that you’ve scoured the website.</p>