<p>Does anyone mind reading ny Why Duke essay and giving me feedback?!</p>
<p>Sent from my HTC Glacier using CC App</p>
<p>no one? 
haha</p>
<p>I would love to read “why duke” essays because, as a duke graduate, I would have a very hard time writing something like this. I had a good education but, frankly, I could have had just as good an education and a hundred other schools that cost less. I really enjoyed my peers and friends but grad school showed me t hat good universities everywhere have bright and active students. The gardens, baskeball games, east campus lifestyle, were very special…but really, they don’t provide enough material to make a strong “why duke” essay. D wants to apply…I can’t think why. So why do you want to attend? OP you want to study music? really? at Duke? when you could go to Oberlin? or Carnegie Mellon? or a dozen great universities with strong music programs? what does duke have that makes it special for you? If you could convince admissions that there is a reasonable reason for your choice, perhaps you will improve your chances.</p>
<p>I’ll read it! :)</p>
<p>I can read it!</p>
<p>send it my way</p>
<p>I’ll read it!</p>
<p>The essay should be “Why Duke? Why?”</p>
<p>I would start with:</p>
<p>Duke:</p>
<p>What gives you the right…</p>
<p>Much better read.</p>
<p>I’ll read, just PM me</p>
<p>I can most likely read it by tonight. PM me :)</p>
<p>I’ll read it if u want</p>
<p>methinks finearts has some panties in a bunch. /awk</p>
<p>Send it my way, too.</p>
<p>You should be really wary of sending your essay to anyone…</p>
<p>I’ll read it if you’d like.</p>
<p>Sure, send it to me.</p>