<p>I just finished the rough draft for my Common App essay. It is still all very much tweakable, so I am looking for some critical views so I can improve it in further versions.</p>
<p>The prompt is to describe a fictional character and how they influenced you.</p>
<p>Looking for readers who are not in class of 2009, very preferably a college student or adult.</p>
<p>Thanks!</p>
<p>I will read it, email it to me: <a href="mailto:pharmakeus01@yahoo.com">pharmakeus01@yahoo.com</a></p>
<p>You can PM it to me if you want a second opinion.</p>
<p>pm to me and i'll give an opinion.</p>
<p>you can PM it to me or ask for email and sent it to me...</p>
<p>I'll be glad to look it over...(I'm an incoming freshman to JHU majoring in IR and minoring in English)</p>
<p>College freshman. Feel free.</p>
<p>If you need another opinion, I'd be more than happy to read it over.
PM me or email me at <a href="mailto:dorkerrhea@gmail.com">dorkerrhea@gmail.com</a></p>
<p>i would love to read it.
feel free to PM
or
<a href="mailto:timmy16263@gmail.com">timmy16263@gmail.com</a></p>
<p>I'd read it. I'm going to college in about two weeks. I also chose this option last year.</p>
<p>i can read it too if you want</p>
<p>I'll take a look
PM it</p>