Why Macalester? Transfer Essay

College Essays
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<p>Hello!</p>

<p>I would be beyond grateful if someone might help me edit the first draft of my essay for Macalester College. While there isn't a word limit on the essay, mine is sitting at about 900. While I have a ton to say on the topic, and am very passionate about attending Mac, I don't want to ramble on and could use some help potentially being more concise! </p>

<p>I also just generally want to know if it's any good....if anyone can help me out please let me know! Thanks so much in advance. </p>

<p>Hannah</p>

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<p>Fellow transfer applicant here! I’ll take a look at it! </p>

<p>Mac was on my application list at first, but I had to cut down and realized the NPC didn’t foretell a good FA outcome.</p>