<p>my first draft, "why Uchicago" 2 paragraph thingy...</p>
<p>thnxxxxxxxxx!! =)</p>
<p>i’ll give you some feedback. PM me.</p>
<p>can pm me
but help me read my commonapp essay also?
thanks alot</p>
<p>Full Disclaimer: I’m applying to UChicago too.</p>
<p>That said, I would read it for you…I already wrote my own, and unless you’re an AMAZING writer, I probably wouldn’t need to steal from you. Check my post history.</p>
<p>And no, I will not be offended if you don’t PM it to me.</p>
<p>buuuuuuuump</p>