<p>It’s a page, 685 words or so.</p>
<p>I really would like a good look over it, just to make sure the question was answered and I expressed enough interest.</p>
<p>This especially goes out to all the accepted EDers, but I would never turn down any other help.</p>
<p>Thanks everyone.</p>
<p>I will PM or e-mail.</p>
<p>i dont have time to offer you a detailed critique but i can read it and tell u if its pennworthy...my why penn essay was incredible... cause how many kids can say "i wanna go to ur school... cause ive been going there since i was like 15" ahh ok its roxylax59@yahoo</p>
<p>Hey, just wanted to know if u had any suggestions as to how I could make the essay somewhat UNIQUE... i just don't want my essay being another of those TYPICAL Why Penn essays that admissions officers see</p>
<p>I sorta made an outline of what i wanna include in it, but how specific do i have to be? should i include professor names and course names etc etc? please give some insight... any help at all will be greatly appreciated</p>
<p>I NEED the essay to stand out!</p>
<p>I can read it over a bit... <a href="mailto:boaluv@gmail.com">boaluv@gmail.com</a> if you need more help :P</p>
<p>I did.</p>
<p>--Stuff about me - IE clubs, camps, interests, music, etc.</p>
<p>then</p>
<p>--How Penn let me further pursue these things.</p>
<p><a href="mailto:xamee86x@yahoo.com">xamee86x@yahoo.com</a></p>
<p>deferred @ wharton ED</p>
<p><a href="mailto:jongowa@gmail.com">jongowa@gmail.com</a></p>
<p><a href="mailto:rahul.k.ghosh@gmail.com">rahul.k.ghosh@gmail.com</a></p>
<p>I talked about clubs I'm in at school or programs I've done, and how Penn has a few clubs like this. Examples include international affairs and student council. I had a paragraph of vague, typical praise regarding their campus, diversity, and great education too.</p>
<p>PM me if you want</p>
<p>looks like you have a lot of willing readers, already, but I'm always open to look at another essay. Just PM me.</p>
<p><a href="mailto:jack_frost429@hotmail.com">jack_frost429@hotmail.com</a>
i'd be happy to look over it for u!</p>
<p>same here-</p>
<p>hmm... I'm going to steal the spotlight for a sec and ask if anyone would like to read MY why penn essay? Just PM me with your email address or let me know that you're interested and I'll send it to you tomorrow.</p>
<p>i'll look it over if i got time</p>
<p>I'll take a look at any of your essays.</p>
<p>send it over any time.</p>
<p>Haha wow, I saved everyone's e-mails and I will send the essay out once I finish rewriting the areas that were commented on.</p>
<p><a href="mailto:fran95@gmail.com">fran95@gmail.com</a></p>