"Why Penn?" Essay

College Essays
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<p>I am just finishing up a rough draft of my "Why Penn?" (communities) essay. I am really worried about this essay. I'm really struggling and worry because I haven't taken any sort of creative approach. My essay is very straightforward. </p>

<p>Anyone willing to look it over? Preferably someone at Penn or in college, but as long as you've built up a decent post count, I'd be happy to have anyone look it over. I need all the help I can get, ha!</p>

<p>So yeah, PM me or post here if you want to look it over. I'd really, really appreciate some honest criticism. It's kind of a mess right now and I need some brutal (yet constructive, ha) criticism to get it closer to where it needs to be. :)</p>

<p>Thank you!</p>

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<p>i’ll critique it if you critique my “what makes duke a good match for me” essay</p>

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<p>Yeah, sure. It’s still a work in progress. You can send me your Duke one whenever… and I’ll send you my Penn one when I send you my commonapp. Thanks!</p>

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<p>I’ll take a look and provide some feedback if you’d like. PM me.</p>

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<p>ok i’m not applying to penn at all so you can email me…i dont know much abt penn though…except for wharton ofcos :)</p>