"Why Penn?"

College Essays
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<p>Hey</p>

<p>Is anybody interested in reading and criticizing the first draft of my "Why Penn?" essay? I'd really appreciate it!!</p>

<p>Thanks a lot in advance! :)</p>

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<p>I am interested. I should warn you that I am hoping to apply to Penn myself though... but the feedback I give will help you, and I will probably never plagiarize from your essay.</p>

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<p>i will do it</p>

<p>don't worry i wont copy (remember i already edited once for you lol) =)
pm me</p>

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<p>I can take a look</p>

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<p>i'd love to help too</p>

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<p>PM me, I've already submitted my Penn supp.</p>

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<p>i'll take a look at it</p>

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<p>I can take a look at it as well
Edit papers as a part time career anyways</p>

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<p>how long are yours'?? I'm writing mine right now and I'm stuck at about 250 words :(</p>

<p>I hate writing.</p>

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<p>it's a bit more than 300 words...</p>

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<p>I'll look at it, I'm not applying to Penn</p>

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<p>PM me if you still need help :)</p>

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<p>pm me, i already got rejected from penn ED lol</p>