<p>I just finished the "tell us what makes Stanford a good place for you" essay and wanted some opinions on it. If you liked it, I would love to have you look over my 150 word essay for the common app as well.</p>
<p>i'll take a look .</p>
<p>are you doing early action?</p>
<p>I can critique it, just PM me</p>
<p>Hi there!</p>
<p>I currently work in my university's admission department. Although I don't have a say in the admission decision, I know how they operate and could give you an honest opinion if your essay works or not. I wouldn't mind reading it and proofing it either. Please email it to <a href="mailto:marc.d.tan@gmail.com">marc.d.tan@gmail.com</a>. I look forward to reading your essay!</p>
<p>Hey... I'm interested in critiquing it. PM me.</p>
<p>ill give u some feedback. pm me</p>
<p>Ill look over it, pm me.</p>
<p>I'll also look over it. PM me</p>
<p>PM me. I'll see what I can do to help.</p>
<p>i'll read it if you need some more help. just pm me.</p>
<p>PM me. ^^. I will read it~</p>
<p>Send it over if you can handle constructive criticism.</p>