<p>I took a slightly more creative approach to this question. Anyone willing to critique the premise/writing?</p>
<p>I can take a look at it if you want–I intially thought of applying to Swarthmore but decided against it-- LAC’s are not for me</p>
<p>I can take a look at it also. 
I already sent in my supplement to Swarthmore, so no need to worry!</p>
<p>I can read it. But I’m '08. I’m not applying to Swarthmore though.</p>
<p>Send it over</p>