<p>Why (our school)?</p>
<p>I think I have written a pretty decent essay but it could surely use a few revisions. Anyone want to help out a HS senior get into college?</p>
<p>Its not too lengthy, 500 words.</p>
<p>Any input would be greatly appreciated.</p>
<p>thanks in advance</p>
<p>sure; send through pm</p>
<p>Sure. You can PM me too.</p>
<p>PM it to me; I'll help.</p>
<p>prefer you yahoo doc to me at bhaircut. thanks</p>
<p>No offence to anyone out there... but I am only gong to be sending this to reputable posters as suggested in the sticky. I would perfer not to have my essay stolen. Like I said, its nothing personal. thanks guys</p>
<p>phi6 and andrewjx - sent thanks alot</p>
<p>I would offer help. pm over :]</p>
<p>i'll read it!</p>
<p>-raises hand-</p>
<p>Ill read it, send it over</p>
<p>sure pm me i'll take a look at it</p>
<p>I can guarantee a good review for you!</p>
<p>sure i'm pretty good with essays and such, I'm my school's newspaper editor</p>
<p>ok....you can PM me also</p>
<p>If you want someone else to take a look at it, I'll do it. I'm doing some transfer apps this year and I'd like to see some "why" essays just to get an idea of how to get started. You can look through my backposts to make sure I'm not applying to your school--I understand if you don't want to send it my way because I'm looking at the same schools. Just PM it to me if you decide to send it my way.</p>
<p>I have sent it to about 8 people and only two have messaged me back. I am going to send it in tomorrow.</p>
<p>I am open to take a look dudeman.
just pm me!</p>
<p>I would read it, and I applied this year, but I did early action...</p>
<p>sure send it to me through pm</p>
<p>i'll take a look at it
pm me</p>