<p>Hey, I've written my common app essay on why I want to transfer, but I'd really like some feedback. I'm worried that it won't come off as genuine, or that what I'm trying to say won't be expressed clearly enough at all, or that it won't flow well (because I sort of combined the two ideas I was considering for what to write about).</p>
<p>Would anyone be willing to read it over for me and let me know what you think or what needs improvement?</p>
<p>I wouldn’t mind</p>
<p>Feel free to PM over here if you need.</p>
<p>I’ll PM it to you both, thanks :)</p>
<p>Anyone else?</p>
<p>I’ll read it. PM me</p>
<p>sure pm me, i would be happy to read it</p>
<p>pm me too! i’m bored ATM and can help with thematic and style issues.</p>
<p>Ill take a look and help you out.</p>
<p>I’m in. :]</p>
<p>Feel free to send it over! :)</p>
<p>I’ll read it. PM me</p>
<p>Why don’t you just post it here?</p>
<p>I’m not going to just post it because I don’t want it searchable, I feel like that’s a bad idea with any essay.</p>
<p>well pm me for feedbacks :)</p>
<p>New draft! Anyone want to read an updated version?</p>
<p>monstersgoMOO,</p>
<p>PM me! I’m in!</p>
<p>i’m in… pm me…</p>
<p>sure pm me</p>