Why UChicago Essay Advice?

<p>Hey guys, I'm applying Early Action this year and I have my extended and optional essays done, but I just wanted to get some advice on my "Why UChicago?" essay. If anybody wants to read it and give me their advice that would be great! Let me know and I will PM it to you
Thanks!</p>

<p>I will give you feedback.</p>

<p>thanks! just sent it</p>

<p>I’ll look over it for you :)</p>

<p>I can too, if you want</p>

<p>I can take a look too, mind taking a glance at mine?</p>