<p>I've been lurking around the forums ever since college applications started, but finally decided to make an account after seeing everybody so helpful in critiquing essays!</p>
<p>Would anyone be willing to review my "why UChicago" essay? I'm worried that I didn't really answer the prompt and that my reasons to attend are too... superficial/ vague. I would especially love to get feedback from those also applying, or those who have already been accepted.</p>
<p>Thanks in advance! I really appreciate the help ^^</p>
<p>i was accepted EA and i have a sibling there. I’d be happy to help. PM me</p>
<p>My son and I can take a look - He was accepted EA. Send it over</p>
<p>oh wait, neither of us have enough posts to pm… gimme a sec and ill rack up enough posts to pm you my email</p>
<p>marsha131211, I used the e-mail function to send you my essay. Does that work?
ChicagoBro, I’ll be awaiting your e-mail! Thanks for your effort.</p>
<p>give me a few seconds to take a look -
will let you know</p>
<p>have not recieved an essay in my marsha131211 inbox</p>
<p>Hrmm… do you think you could PM me your e-mail? So sorry for the inconvenience ><</p>
<p>have it
give me about 30 minutes or so</p>
<p>-sigh- College Confidential is making this so difficult… marsha, I think CC is blocking your e-mail because it comes out as **** And I couldn’t reply directly to your PM because I don’t have enough posts. I am so very sorry for all this inconvenience. Guess I should’ve posted more before asking people to critique my essay =P</p>
<p>Same, accepted EA and willing to read for you.</p>
<p>hotpongtato: sent it to you through the e-mail function. Hope this works and thanks for your help!</p>
<p>forgive me for the useless posting, im trying to get 15 so i can pm</p>
<p>Are you getting my email??
THnaks
Marsha</p>
<p>I can help you I am a great writer. PM me and I’ll give you a good and speedy response</p>