<p>I need to send it in sometime this week, and would like to have some people look at it quickly before I do. It's anecdotal, and I tried to be showy and not telly. I'm having trouble with the "How would you improve the school aspect?"</p>
<p>Anybody interested?</p>
<p>I don't mind if you're an 09 applicant, you can't really use my essay as it is pretty personal and specific. However, I would prefer no UPenn applicants.</p>
<p>I'd be glad to take a look and offer feedback. PM me :)
I am not applying to Penn.</p>
<p>i would be glad to read it over!
i am also not applying to upenn.</p>
<p>I don't mind reading it. I am not applying to UPenn either.</p>
<p>Send it over!!</p>
<p>I can help out. PM me.</p>
<p>i want to read it but i'm applying to Penn. haha </p>
<p>but good luck!!!</p>
<p>Sure, I'd love to read it... and if you’re worried about people stealing your essay feel free to email me at my school account... but I'd prefer a pm</p>
<p><a href="mailto:sxkamboj@ucdavis.edu">sxkamboj@ucdavis.edu</a></p>
<p>i can take a look at it if you want!</p>
<p>I can read it.</p>
<p>I can read it.</p>
<p>Sounds interesting!</p>
<p>I'll check it out. :D</p>
<p>sure, pm me.</p>