<p>are there any tips or advice how to make these kind of essays more interesting? I feel like the one I wrote for a particular college sounds like I'm advertising... </p>
<p>Thanks!</p>
<p>Be sure to show and not just tell. Consider writing about a personal experience and then tie that experience into what you’re looking for in college if you currently sound too blunt.</p>
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