Why Yale Essay

<p>I would really appreciate it if someone could read my 'Why Yale' transfer essay, and give me some feedback!
Thanks in advance!!</p>

<p>I’ll give some feedback.</p>

<p>that 2-3% was to low for me to try so I am not applying this year so i will give it a read if you want</p>

<p>I’ll read it.</p>

<p>I sent you a message with my feeback :D</p>

<p>I’ll read!</p>

<p>Castiel and nvilla, thank you both for you comments!
They really helped!</p>

<p>I’ll read it!</p>

<p>Send it. Send it.</p>

<p>I’ll read it if you don’t mind.</p>

<p>Thank you everyone. I got plenty of comments, so I don’t really need anymore…
But all of you, Thanks!</p>