<p>For the Why Yale paragraph, I took a somewhat different approach. I discussed the focus on undergraduate education, "Blue Booking," the diversity of classes (specifically the 52 different languages) offered, etc and related it all to being like a "kid in a candy shop," where I would be excited to try many things.</p>
<p>Assuming it's written pretty well, would this be a good approach? It's fairly specific to Yale, and although other similar schools may offer similar benefits I think it really describes the top reason for Yale to be at the top of my list.</p>
<p>Thanks guys.</p>