Will any parent read my finalized essay? I need another perspective. Thanks

<p>curmudgeon and I worked very hard on writing this essay. Can any parent here read and give some feedbacks? That would be greatly appreciated. I'll send it via e-mail.</p>

<p>You are far too kind. It's a good essay and you found it yourself. It was hidden in there all the time. Good luck to you,and have some confidence. Things have a way of working out.</p>