Will anybody read (and edit) my Common App essay?

<p>Hey everyone, I wrote essay on a personal experience: taking Public Speaking summer of Freshman Year. I think it has a good point, but would appreciate any feedback, so I'll PM it to you guys. I'm hoping to apply to colleges like UChicago, Occidental, Reed, Macalester, and Whitman, SO it has to be pretty good. Thanks.</p>

<p>you can PM it to me, I’ll help.</p>

<p>Anyone credible?</p>

<p>PM courtneyenpointe; she is a trustable editor and has helped greatly with my essays.</p>

<p>All right, I PM’d her.</p>

<p>Shameless bump.</p>

<p>110 views, but no one will read it?</p>

<p>I’ll read it! I’m not sure if I am the “credible” type you are looking for (I do not have many posts) but I have finished my common app essay (already applied to Penn ED) and will not take any parts of your essay. I will get back to you quick if you do, in fact, decide to PM me!</p>

<p>I’ll read it. I’ve already wrote my own essay and sent out my applications as you can see from my previous posts. PM me.</p>

<p>i’ll read, pm :)</p>

<p>All right, thanks guys!</p>

<p>I’ll take a look if you like.</p>

<p>I can read it if u pm to me.</p>

<p>Thanks guys!</p>

<p>I’ll read it. Fair warning I will be harsh.</p>

<p>Anyone else?</p>

<p>New and improved version.</p>

<p>I rewrote it a bit. BUMP!?</p>

<p>I’ll read and critique.</p>

<p>Okay, I’ll send it over.</p>