Will anyone please read my CommonApp Essay?

<p>I am an athlete with very good EC's, GPA/Class rank, decent tests, and terrible writing ability. Much appreciation if anyone would be willing to read and give me feedback on what they would do on the essay. If you're willing just post and I will PM it to you. Thanks!!</p>

<p>I can read it over and give you some feedback.</p>

<p>PM it to me if you want :)</p>

<p>I’d be happy to read it :)</p>

<p>I’ll critique it for you.</p>

<p>I’ll take a look at it and give you my two cents. PM me =)</p>

<p>PM’d all of you. Thanks!!</p>

<p>PM to me if you like. I love writing, I can give general tips.</p>

<p>P.S. Don’t take all ^^ these people’s every figment of advice! My English teacher with 2 master’s degrees edited mine, and I only took half of his suggestions. There comes a point where advice is no longer helpful.</p>