Will anyone read my essay?

<p>So, I feel like I am not doing this essay thing right, so if anyone of you guys who know what your doing or how this is supposed work please read my essay and let me me know, if I am doing it right.
Thanks!</p>

<p>Sure, I can.</p>

<p>bumppppppppp</p>

<p>anyyyonee :[ bumpp</p>

<p>I can help with flow and overall structure</p>

<p>pm me if you will</p>