will anyone review my essay?

<p>I'm not done with it yet. It's only about 150 words so far.
Please PM me !</p>

<p>Sure I’ll get back to you immediately.</p>

<p>id love to read it :)</p>

<p>I’d love to read .
But to be honest I’m not that good . So maybe you won’t get alot of things useful from me .
If you want me to read it the PM me .</p>