Will babysit for essay critiques!

College Essays
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<p>If you would like, I can PM you my essay! Please comment/critique/give advice! It's about 650 words, so please feel free to give advice on how I can cut down my essay without cutting a major organ! (It was 770 words at first, so I'm at my wit's end)</p>

<p>Thanks for your help!</p>

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<p>Bump…</p>

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<p>sure. PM it to me.</p>

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<p>I’ll take a look. PM it over.</p>

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<p>I’ll read it, too. PM me.</p>