<p>Unique Essay (at least I hope) from this prompt:</p>
<p>Reflect on a time when you challenged a belief or idea. What prompted you to act? Would you make the same decision again?</p>
<p>I've already submitted it to a couple colleges but have another that the deadline is Feb. 1 (Michigan) and I would like to improve it all that I can.</p>
<p>Don't need excessive editing (feel free if you want to!) just tell me what you think and how I could make it better.</p>
<p>I will PM it to you. </p>
<p><strong>And since this is probably the last school I'm applying to I have time to look at other people's essays if needed PM me or reply.</strong></p>