will my 14 schools hate this...

<p>...like i do? writing is s'posed to be my 'thing'. but my essay's about getting robbed and giving up...i'm worried. please critique it harshly.</p>

<p>i will read it.</p>

<p>I can help if you want. I'm already in college (class of 2010) and am a writing tutor at my university</p>

<p>i will read your essay!</p>

<p>I'll read it, PM it over =)</p>

<p>PM me if you want!</p>

<p>ILL Read it too if you emaail: <a href="mailto:narcissa09@gmail.com">narcissa09@gmail.com</a></p>

<p>PM it to me ... :)</p>