This is my first draft for my common app essay. It’s still a fairly rough draft. I’d like to know if the general idea of the essay is decent. If you’d like to read it, I’ll send you the link in a message. Be as critical as you think necessary.
I’d take a look over it!
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Would be glad to do!
If you wan’t more feedback I’d be happy to look it over for you.
A rising sophomore in college, send it my way and I’d be happy to critique it.
I am also a rising sophomore in college, I can take a look if you still need people. Also, be a little cautious about sending your essay out to people with few posts (look at one of the sticky threads).
@yikesyikesyikes Yeah, that’s good advice. Just a question: what could happen to me if I did send my essay to a sketchy person?
Well, they could use it for themselves if they are applying to colleges. Fellow seniors may be great resources too, but you need to be careful about who to trust - especially when they have no emotional attachment or investment in you (strangers on the internet).