<p>please help me critique my essay? I'm pm it anyone interested.</p>
<p>Thanks!!!!!!!!!!!!</p>
<p>i can help! im an 09er</p>
<p>i will :).</p>
<p>just pm me</p>
<p>I can feedback/comment/edit if you like. I need a bit of time before I can send it back to you though. 
Good luck! Just PM</p>