Will someone please edit my essay?

<p>My teachers are no help. They're either too busy, or just don't even want to bother. Will someone please edit my essay and give me some feedback?</p>

<p>I’m a senior, but I’ll read if you’re cool with it :-)</p>

<p>hey, ill read yours if you can read mine!! </p>

<p>pm me <3</p>