<p>Hi guys!
Since I'm an international student, I was hoping someone would help me proofreading my essay.
Any help would be extremely appreciated!
Thank you!</p>
<p>sure 
pm …im a brutal critic though!</p>
<p>Thank you BoomBoxBoom!
Great, I need brutal readers
I’ll PM it to you</p>
<p>anyone else?</p>
<p>I wouldn’t mind taking a look at it for you.</p>
<p>I will gladly look everything over for you.</p>
<p>i can take a look</p>
<p>I PMed all of you. Thank you!</p>
<p>I dont have 15 posts yet, so I’ll post here.
Ok, a few edits:
Replace second “amazing” in paragraph 2 with a synonym.
Replace “drowned myself” with a different phrase, has unintended implications.
Throughout the essay it’s spelled “lose”, not “loose”</p>
<p>Otherwise you are pretty solid!</p>
<p>But what school is that the prompt for?</p>
<p>Thank you murr95!
It’s for Common app, I’m applyint to 5 universities through it.</p>