Will someone please read my college essay?#forWashington University

Transfer Students
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<p>I am current student at a selective, private research university, but I would like to transfer to a better research university, such as Washington University in St.Louis. I currently have a 3.67 GPA and many extracurricular activities. I am a bit unsure whether or not my essay conveys valid reasons for transferring from my current university. Would you-all be able to read my college essay and grant me some feedback as to what I can do to improve it or my chances of getting into Washington University? </p>

<p>*Chance me and I will chance back!</p>

<p>-I'll email the paper to anyone who would be able to view my paper!</p>

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<p>Hey I’ve applied to Washington University in St. Louis too (Application completed on March 1st)
I will take a look at your essay.</p>

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<p>I have sent it to you.</p>

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<p>The German one right?
Very good essay man. Maybe if you talked a little more about why you want to transfer - like specific reasons - what the school offer that your school can’t etc.</p>

<p>But the essay is excellent.</p>

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<p>Thanks, Matisyahu! I will improve my essay.</p>

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<p>I’ll read your essay!</p>

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<p>Hey wait…does WASHU have a supplementary essay??? Or are you talking about the commonapp essay…?</p>

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<p>I am talking about the Common App essay. There is no supplementary essay for Wash-U. </p>

<p>Weisheit, I have sent you my essay.</p>

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<p>Hi, I’ll be applying to Wash U shortly, i am in the process of writing the essay now. I’d love to review your essay to see how i stack up.</p>

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<p>Sure, send that essay my way and i’ll give you my honest opinion and some constructive criticism.</p>

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<p>Closing old thread for obvious reasons.</p>