Will someone PLEASE read my essat for DARTMOUTH ED?

College Essays
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<p>Helloooooooooooooo
would you please, have a look at my essay? I am an international student applying to Darmouth ED and some other schools of that rank.I do need helpppppppppp</p>

<p>Thanks in advance for your time and consideration. I hope to get some help;)</p>

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<p>Hey, I can help. PM it over :)</p>

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<p>Pm it over :)</p>

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<p>I would be happy to help, I frequently edit college essays in my english class.</p>

<p>Pm me!</p>

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<p>PM me. Would love to give any constructive criticism on ur essay</p>

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<p>You can PM it to me…not applying…I’ll be an honest critique</p>

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<p>Sure, not applying either. So please, please include Dartmouth’s prompts.</p>

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<p>I’m a 2013’er. PM me the essay with prompts. I’m a tough critic</p>

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<p>PM me. :slight_smile:
I will give you some feedback.</p>