<p>Can someone tell me how it is or if I need any changes?</p>
<p>de bump de bump</p>
<p>I could give it some critique if you want. </p>
<p>P.S I’m not applying there.</p>
<p>Thank you! 
PMED!</p>
<p>Hey, I sent a critique. Don’t know if you got it or not 'cause your pm box is full.</p>
<p>Could you send it again? I had to delete a bunch of PMS! Hopefully, you can recopy it from sent messages folder.</p>