Will someone please read my Yale supplement essay?

<p>The prompt is any topic of your choice. I decided to write my essay on sketching (one of my extracurriculars is art) and how observing their mannerism helps draw their physical form. My mom is Asian so her English sucks, and my younger sister won't bother to read it. I'm only asking for quick feedback! Thanks so much :D</p>

<p>If you provide your email, I'll send you the first 500 words. I'm still re-working the conclusion. Just need to know if I should scrap the essay or keep it. :)</p>

<p>I’d be happy to read it if you still need help :slight_smile: My email is <a href="mailto:avitarelli@msn.com">avitarelli@msn.com</a>. Do you mind checking out a post I made? I’m just looking for some general feedback on my chances of getting admitted into certain schools.</p>

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<p>I’ll read yours if u can read my common app essay. PM me</p>

<p>Feel free to PM me.</p>

<p>As you can tell, I am only interested in BC.</p>

<p>if you read mine…</p>