Will someone PLEASE review my essay? :)

Colleges and Universities A-Z Brown University
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<p>I’m not going to send the Brown one just because it is out of my hands and there is no use worrying. However, because chances are that I will not get into Brown, I would love for people to ready my common app essay so that I can tweak it for my other applications. I trust you guys the most! It’s not very long – about 600 words – so it won’t take that long. Thanks SO much guys, I appreciate it.</p>

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<p>Sure, I wouldn’t mind reading it!</p>

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<p>I’ll take a look</p>

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<p>sure I’ll read it over for you.</p>

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<p>I’ll help :)</p>

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<p>PM me if you want. I can show you mine, too.</p>

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<p>Wait, this may be a ■■■■■■■■ question, but if we submit our apps online, then how could we tweak them? Like, for example, if I want to submit my app to Amherst, I can’t edit a single thing…</p>

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<p>PM me - I’d be glad to read it! :)</p>

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<p>You just delete it and upload the edited one</p>