Will someone read and critique my essay? Please :D

College Essays
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<p>Alright, so international student here with a first draft of the common app essay. I need to know if this comes even close to an essay that will get me to the Ivy Leagues.</p>

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<p>you can’t pm it to anyone until you have 15 posts, keep in mind</p>

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<p>Sure, Y not:D</p>

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<p>forgot to say i’ll read</p>

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<p>I’ll read it</p>

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<p>I’ll read it :)</p>

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<p>I’ll read it! I’m attending Duke this fall :)</p>