<p>It's nearly finished, but I'm 20 words over and I don't know what should be taken out. If someone has the time to read it and give me some feedback and editing tips, I 'd really appreciate it! (:</p>
<p>It's nearly finished, but I'm 20 words over and I don't know what should be taken out. If someone has the time to read it and give me some feedback and editing tips, I 'd really appreciate it! (:</p>