Will someone read my commonapp transfer essay, please?

College Essays
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Hi,

I’m looking for some feedback for my commonapp transfer essay. I really want my essay to come out right, and I’ve rewritten it a few times now. Please let me know if you would be interested in helping me out, and I’ll PM you the essay.

Many thanks,
FrayedPages

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I would be happy to review your essay and give some feedback.

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Thank you! PM sent!

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I’m not sure if you’ve already submitted your essay, but I’d be willing to look, too.

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I have submitted it, but thank you very much!