<p>The thing about my essay is that I tried really hard to show personality, but I kind of feel like i lose some sentimentality by doing so. This is definitely still a rough draft i just wrote it in 1 hour 5 mins ago :p</p>
<p>sure! pm it over and ill take a look</p>
<p>Same. Shoot me a PM :)</p>
<p>sure! PM me!</p>
<p>I can definitely try to edit it. Please PM it to me 
I can also tell you some ideas that my daughter wrote in her essay.</p>
<p>I’d be happy to help! send me a PM :)</p>
<p>glad to help also. pm it over</p>